miércoles, 12 de noviembre de 2014

6th part of my untitled story

     "Guilty", she said... Then, something changed. That mighty woman disappeared. The mirror was empty. Astonished, Adam got closer to it, and, for a second, it looked like a normal mirror giving his image back. But it was just for a second...

-What are you looking at?-said his own voice from that crystaline body.
-What the...?

     Adam could avoid his own attack just in time. "The man of the mirror", who was just like him, got out of his "prison" and tried to hit him. His attitude was calmed, but, at the same time, powerful and energetic. It was not him. He was not as strong as "that creature", so he suppoused that "it" would not have the same weaknesses. The only way to still entire was run. "That man" could see with his black eyes his intentions, as if they were written on his forehead. They were not exacty equals. Apart from the eyes, there was something strange with him. It was his way of looking and the expression of his face and his whole body. All this jigsaw formed the opposite of Adam. Self-confidence. Strength. Courage. Cruelty...

    In just one blow, it broke one of the columns, and all the edifice moaned because of its lost. As a revenge, it started falling down. Pieces of pure rock were dropping everywhere: the perfect chance. Adam took advantage of the confusion and jumped out a window, closing his eyes. 

     Gravity disappeared. The wind stroke his face and his hair. But, suddenly, a brusque blow made him go inside that "hilarious" place. "That thing" had caught him from his nape. It was smiling, and his face was like a mad's one. Then, an idea appeared in his mind. With a fast movement, Adam got rid of "himself" and jumped into the mirror.





1 comentario:

  1. 1. Another amazing chapter, as always.
    2. I promise to do a parody of this one.
    When...? Surprise (I do not even know it)

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