sábado, 10 de enero de 2015

Exam

Task: Write an outline for an essay. Include a thesis statement, supporting ideas and details.

I. Tobbaco should not be allowed in our society.

II. It is a drug.
     A. It is addictive.
     B. It is dangerous for our health.
          1. Its addiction makes us consume more and more cigarettes, so you waste more and more money.
          2. It can provoke many diseases, such as cancer, heart problems and damage in our lungs, our teeth and our lips.

III. Its advertising is directed to all kind of public, including children and young people (especially in the past, when it was not controlled).
     A. In many cases, it includes "hidden messages".
     B. It sounds healthy and elegant despite the diseases it causes.
          1. It tries to manipulate people.
          2. It makes the children see that smoking is funny. An example of this is the chocolate cigarettes that were sold in the past.
 IV. The Goverment manipulates people by this way in order to earn money.
     A. Its methods are dangerous for us.
     B. Politcians are paid in order to makebetter policies.
          1.  Adverts are everywhere: television, the newspaper, the radio, etc.
          2. Cigarettes are too expensive, and they are more dangerous and addictive than the original tobbaco.

V. Conclusion. Nowdays, in theory, the society warn people about the diseases caused by smoking, and there are smoker areas in places such as restaurants or bars. Nevertheless, in practice, its price still being high and it is not forbidden. Thus, as a result, the tobbaco industry is a business very lucrative despite the fact that it is dangerous.

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